Outlines for writing task 2

Outline for Ielts Writing Task 2 ngày 29.8

Outline for ielts writing task 2

Ielts writing task 2 ngày 29.08

Topic: Some people think that the governments should give financial support to artists, musicians and poets. Others think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  • Futile (having no purpose) spending:

– Other more important fields to take care of: health, economic development, education (raise people’s awareness of art value)

– Artists can take care of themselves without the Government’s financial support .

– With the Internet & social networks, artists can publish their works online à have a large amount of audience or even sell their products for millions of dollars.

  • Essential investment:

– They make considerable contribution to the national culture:

  • Works of art bring spiritual value, have magical power to nourish our souls (e.g: music)
  • Offer a diversity of means of entertainment and relaxation

– Financial enhancement from the Government can:

  • Nourish their artistic talents
  • Artist can pursuit their passions à produce true works of art rather than unqualified products to earn a living
  • Personal viewpoints (suggested)

– This policy has its pros and cons, but the benefits may outweigh its drawbacks

– The Government should balance their expenditure on artistic areas and other fields.

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